August 3, 2000
Dear Diary,
I had the strangest dream last
night! Let me see if I can remember how it went. I’ll just tell you each thing
as it comes to me. Okay. Here goes:
Darkness. It pressed in on me and I
couldn't breathe. I took a deep breath, but I still needed more air. I gasped, but I just couldn't catch my breath. Pressure pushed against the back of my
eyes. My ears felt full and pulsed. My head spun. I squeezed my eyes shut
and focused on slow, deep breaths. It helped a lot. My racing heart finally
slowed, but a metallic smell invaded my senses until I could actually taste it. Blood. My heart started to pound again.
I wondered where I was at and what had happened to me. I opened
my mouth to speak, but I couldn't push the words out.
“Take it easy. I’m right here.” A
deep, soothing voice filled my ears, lifting a weight that pressed against my
chest. He swept my bangs aside with a strong, gentle hand, and warm comfort
wrapped around my heart. I relaxed and let out a breath as if I’d been holding
it. “That’s it. Everything is going to be alright, now. I promise,” he said.
I opened my eyes to look at him, but I couldn't see him through the thick darkness. Just his eyes. They glowed with kindness and gentleness. Something beautiful and light feeling broke loose from somewhere deep
inside me. It bubbled up and spilled into my heart. It sounds funny, I know.
But that’s the only way I can describe it.
Then, I woke up. For real. It was
the end of my dream. Is that strange or what? What could it mean? Of course,
it’s just a dream, so it doesn’t really mean anything. Right? So, why do I feel
like somehow there’s something significant about it? And who was my… what was
he? A rescuer? A friend? What?
Majorly befuddled,
Beth
Haha, I like her line 'Then, I woke up. For real.' I can just hear the emphasis in her voice. I like where this is going! Lots of foreshadowing, I think!
ReplyDeleteEeek! So glad! I was Snoopy Dancing inside after I wrote it. Love it when inspiration hits like that. And, yes. Forshadowing.... ;)
Deletevery fun excerpts, Linnette! Thank you for sharing your excellent gift!
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing such great excerpts of your excellent talent!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Cheryl! :D
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