“Woah, there youngster.”
Rick snagged his granddaughter’s arm.
“What’s all this excitement?”
“Papaw! I saw the deer
family! I saw the mommy deer and the two
little fawns!” Valen bounced into her
grandfather’s arms.
“You did? In the meadow?”
“Yes, Papaw! We have
to tell Mimi! She loves the baby deer!”
Rick laughed and touched the freckled cheek of his five year
old grandchild, visiting for the summer.
She favored his wife, Shanna. Red
spiraled curls and mischievous green eyes shined.
“Mimi!” The screen door slammed behind Shanna.
Rick gazed at his bride, she still stole his breath. Hair piled in a messy knot of curls and
glasses perched on the end of her nose, she sauntered to the worktable where
dusty artifacts littered every inch of space and old books piled high in
towers. A sarcophagus leaned against the
wall and straw filled crates spilled open.
Shanna broke into his favorite smile when Valen’s excitement
reached her.
“Hello, my two favorite people!” Shanna enveloped Valen and kissed her nose. “What’s all the commotion?”
“Hello, my two favorite people!” Shanna enveloped Valen and kissed her nose. “What’s all the commotion?”
Shanna clapped her hands together with sheer glee. “Oh Valen,
I’m so glad you got to see them!” She
escorted Valen to the worn leather sofa.
Rick settled beside them and listened to Valen chatter. He and Shan stole smoldering glances over her
head. Resting his arm along the back of
the couch, he fingered Shan’s curls while she listened to Valen’s account of
the fawn’s antics.
Before long Valen
finished her story and wandered away to another adventure.
Rick stroked Shanna’s cheek, she flushed under his touch like
a school girl. It reminded him of the
moment he fell in love with her.
“I want to show you something.” Taking his hand, she led him to the
table. “Look at this piece.”
“It isn’t Terran.”
Rick locked his eyes on Shanna. “You mean…”
“It’s Ampeliagian, Rick.”
He furrowed his brow.
“Are you sure?”
“Test it with your quantum EMF.”
“I will.” He turned
the vase over in his hands inspecting it from every angle. “I didn’t think things could cross to this
side of the veil.”
Rick dragged Shan and
the vase to his side of the boat house. Pushing aside the large vinyl strips
separating the lab from her artifacts, they stepped into his world of shiny
surfaces and beakers. Computers lined
one wall and a table of electronic and magnetic measuring instruments mirrored
it.
He analyzed the vase and shared a grin with Shanna when the
needle spiked into the quantum range.
They were so engrossed in their work that they didn’t notice the sunset
or passing of time.
“Where is Valen?” Shanna stretched.
Rick looked up absentmindedly from his computer. “Huh? I don’t know. It isn’t like her to be away so long.”
“Rick!” Shanna’s face sketched worried lines and her
voice weakened with dread.
Walking along the dock, Shanna paused, then pointed. “Rick!”
Shanna sprinted,
calling “Valen! Valen!”
Rick thrashed to the center of the pond. Tilting the canoe
toward him, he peered inside. Valen’s
daisy flip flop lay abandoned in the bottom.
The screen door slammed. Shanna sped to the pier’s foot,
peeling off her clothes. “She isn’t
answering!” White skin pierced black water.
Diving and searching, praying and hoping, they desperately groped for
their precious granddaughter in the recessed depths.
Memories assailed Rick.
Thirty years ago this had happened, except Shan was the one
missing. She had crossed over into
another world, Ampeliagia, and lived several years as the foster daughter of a
great king, the companion to three exceptional women, and servant to a god she
curiously called, Juan.
Once again, he sought a red headed girl who had stolen his
heart, but this one was his own flesh and blood. Plunging deeper each time, he
penetrated the mysterious lake. The moon
and stars danced across the ripples, beauty mocking the frenetic search.
“What if he failed this time?”
No, he would not lose Valen.
After thirty minutes his muscles
screamed in agony and he knew Shan was exhausted. He sent her to the pier.
~ by Yellabelly at Flickr |
“Rick!”
Shan’s voice wasn’t coming from the dock or the canoe as he
expected.
“Rick!”
Scouring the edges of the shadowy pond, he caught a snatch of
white between the reeds.
“Dear, God” he splashed toward Shanna’s voice. She bent over the frail form and puffed into
her mouth.
Rick slogged into the shallows and collapsed beside the lifeless
body of his granddaughter. “Shanna, is she…”
The chest of Rick’s tiny grandbaby rose and fell as Shanna
forced air into her lungs. Willing his
granddaughter to live, he cried.
Breathe.
He waited an eternity.
Water lapped along the shore.
Shanna forced air.
A bat fluttered across the sky.
Shanna forced breath.
Shanna forced life.
“Thank you, Juan.”
Shanna whispered and cradled Valen upright.
Valen retched volumes of water.
Her eyes focused on the faces hovering above her and
registered alarm. “Where am I?” She
rasped out.
“Valen, honey, you’re here with Mimi and Papaw. You’re okay, we saved you.” Shanna cooed and smoothed Valen’s hair.
“Bor!” Valen’s little voice moaned in grief too deep for her
years.
Rick buried his face in his hands.
“Bailen, Achbor!” Her
mourning cries broke the stillness of the night.
Shanna’s startled gasp drew Rick’s gaze.
“Did you say Achbor?”
She whispered.
“My son! Do you know
where he is?” Valen seized Shanna’s arms
and implored. “Regolian will kill
him. We must hide them both.”
Shanna made a popping sound in the back of her throat and her
eyes slid out of focus.
“She crossed.” Shanna trembled in shock. “She crossed over. She was Achbor’s mother.”
“I can’t believe it. Achbor told me once I reminded him of
his mother, Valen.” Shanna gaped at her granddaughter. “She lived a lifetime in Ampeliagia, she’ll
never be the same. She’s not a child
anymore.”
“If anyone can help
her through this it is you. Think of the
bond you’ll share. You both loved a
great king, her son, your foster father.”
Shanna fingered the
burgundy ringlets splayed across Valen’s face and longing flashed across hers.
She was homesick for Ampeliagia. Rick determined in that moment to find a way
to open the door between the two worlds.
The End
~ by LaDonna |
*Unless otherwise indicated, all photos found via Bing images.
What a beautifully fascinating adventure mingled with a sweet love story and more mystery than imaginable! Great work LaDonna! I'm typically not a reader of this genre but now I think I might just be hooked. ;)
ReplyDeleteI know, right? LaDonna did a fabulous job and you described it all perfectly, Donna! :D
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Thank you so much Donna! This was part of a book of stories that I gave to my mom last Christmas. All were stories related to or explaining back stories of my Sisterhood Saga. I put them all in a big bound book with elaborate art work and poems and songs between the stories. Each story had a tea bag at the beginning that had something to do with the story...for this story it said, Herbal Tea from Rick's Garden. Anyway, I called the book A Story and a Cup of Tea and gave it to her with a little tea set. She loved it, being my biggest and only fan. LOL. Thanks so much for your kind remarks.
ReplyDeleteOh dear, now I have to prove I am not a robot...I hope I can do it this time..
Thank you, Linnette, for this opportunity to publish my words. Love this Friday with Friends idea! Thanks again!
ReplyDeleteYou're so welcome, LaDonna! And if you come up with something else, drop me a line. My Fridays are always open. :D
ReplyDeleteTerrific read! Very capturing! You stirred my imagination and kept me wanting more. I hope that Rick finds that doorway between worlds.
ReplyDelete*Likes Frank's comment*
ReplyDeleteOoh he does and launches a whole new book series. Lol. Thanks, Frank.
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